Revision Saturation

I have been revising so intently for so many hours that tonight when Cowboy said he “is usually sleeping by now,” I tried to rearrange it in my head to make it a stronger phrase. “Let’s see, -ly needs to be changed; is -too passive; needs more clarity, etc.”

Geesh!

I think I need to go to sleep. It’s now past midnight and I am not a night person.